The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
The nature of imitation has long existed in human history and continued to the modern era. It is as well noticed that people tend to follow fashion trends or purchase products of extreme similarity. From my point of view, I agree with the statement to some extent as holding an opposing thought.
With an intention to better integrate with groups oneself believe to belong, dressing and behaving in a certain way is rather a regular phenomenon to observe. Considering that more precisely, the sense of identity conception can serve as a reason for such inevitable circumstances occurring. A normal person generally requires acceptance and approval from others throughout his life process, which the desire even enhances during puberty years. Therefore, possessing the same perspective on aesthetics or topics as the defined consensus plays an essential role in both individual lives and the operation of societies.
Despite the fact that we usually take part in the spreading of specific ideas, there are at times when the costumers obtain the merchandise for their own good by seeing the leaders as their models. Instead of simply mimicking one another, the initial motivation comes from the urge to make an improvement or for greater experiences. For instance, the promotion of consuming superfood went viral among social media and brought positive influences along without a doubt. The lead of supporting forest fires in Australia also emerged and stimulated the public to catch up on the flow, which dominated a stunning chain reaction sweeping over the entire world.
In conclusion, the new fashion trend within every season or time period does demonstrate human behavior of simulating each other, however, the content and the aim of the popularity rising are what truly decide the value of the blow-up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26804123711 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74308181089 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707903780069 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2805442471 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088793160978 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268238733968 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327956706226 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564977945194 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438904190848 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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