The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to individuals and society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The media has played a crucial role in the livelihood of civilians as the information transmission so that people can absorb news rapidly just in a touch. However, the media tendency is more preferable to provide negative news instead of the positive modifications that could be harmful to the cognition of people. From my perspective, I partly agree with this statement whereas there remains controversy between the positive and negative impacts.
On the one hand, negative news can have detrimental effects on people’s mental state that causes anxiety, insecurities, and obsession. Due to the fact that this can cause misunderstanding conversation in several aspects within the submission of government and lose faith in it. For example, frequent news on wars and terrorism may expand fear amongst the citizens. As a consequence, people may hesitate to travel around the world as well as the expansion in distance between people can increase the misjudgment about the characteristic of individuals. In addition, the news should concentrate on the developments as well as the positive aspects in order to reassure the cognition of individuals as well as bridge the gap between culture and people.
On the other hand, constantly updating problems and emergencies is an effective method of disseminating information. People from anywhere can acknowledge the emergency virtually immediately in order to against the negative impacts. This evidence is provided by the nick of time information on the lethal Covid-19 virus on news reports, citizens around the world are now aware of its precautions and preventive measures, leading to a decreased number of people infected. Thereby raising people's awareness about the consequences of certain problems in the society such as news about cancer and propaganda against smoking have been a common topic in the media. As a result, an increasing number of people have quit smoking and therefore build a better and healthier community.
In conclusion, news always updating about the emergencies around the livelihood of residents above the positive and negative, both of them have different aspects, however, the determination of news are including the immediate information transmission to civilians.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
The media has played a crucial role in the livelihood...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48991354467 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12555121832 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538904899135 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3304948733 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.071428571 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16523870273 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565148626923 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513625441646 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104370026069 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397609978194 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.