Testing on animals medicines for human. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Currently, there is a widespread belief that using animals for medicine purposes is a definitely an important development. Nevertheless, there are those who do not share this view. The aim of this essay is outline arguments and examples in favor of and against each position. In the rest of this I will give my opinion.
There is no doubt that our world counts numerous number of diseases. Unfortunately, in order to give pills for people, scientists must be sure firstly, that medicines are safe. Sometimes, testing medicines on human can be dangerous. Thus, that is why scientists and doctors have to check spillover effects on animals before selling tablets. For instance, it was reported in The New York Times that in 2017 more than 15 million of people not only were healed, but also saved only because of such necessary measure.
On the other hand, there is a standard argument against advantages. A lot of animals are killed in laboratories. And it is the bitter truth. Unquestionably, a huge number of animals were perished because of it. Unlikely, some animals are used in makeup companies, not to help people in cases of emergency but for money. For example. zoologists conducted a research a fortnight ago and revealed that almost one-third of laboratory animals were tortured and then killed only because of cosmetics production.
To conclude, taking everything into account, I truly believe that people have to stop torture animals in laboratories, since it is cruel to cruel to make animals, suffering only because of money and other profits. Medicine can be tested on animals only on necessary occasions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, nevertheless, so, then, third, thus, for example, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05597014925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85514576123 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4420020618 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7058823529 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246529742178 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747773205518 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632816298536 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137250725981 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271281937145 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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