There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is one of the most noticeable trends in today’s society. Although there are many common genres of music and international music has become more prevalent, I believe traditional music is more important.
There are many reasons why we need music in our lives. First, music has a significant benefit in terms of calming the body and may be used as a stress reliever. For example, after a long day at work people enjoy lying down on a sofa and listening to mellow music, which may be relaxing and gentle to the spirit. Second, Music helps improve sleep quality for some individuals who often have insomnia. For instance, listening to a bit of Mozart music before going to bed will help sleep better for those who have difficulty sleeping.
In my opinion, traditional music should be prioritized over today's popularized international music. It is true that international music is becoming increasingly popular around the world. Because it can be catchy, contemporary, innovative and exciting but it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and sold by business people. Traditional music, by contrast, is one of the national heritages that symbolizes a community's history, customs, and thoughts . For example, Vietnamese folk music is extremely diverse and it expresses spiritual cultural activities of country people.
In conclusion, music has its own value and is necessary in our lives, and I believe it will be more meaningful if people pay more attention to and appreciate traditional music from our country.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20161290323 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95830500846 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.450559124 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2307692308 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478674545218 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19378444522 0.084324248473 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12189059345 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316941052549 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096007771935 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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