There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
It is true that in recent years, more and more people tend to travel and settle in different nations. Although there are some good advantages towards this trend, in my opinion, I believe that people should travel and live in different countries in a certain number in order to avoid creating negative development in these countries.
On the one hand, I accept that this tendency brings about various benefits for people who hope to live in a foreign country. Firstly, life in other nation will foster people broaden their horizon both knowledge and experience. For example, when settling in a different country, people are easily exposed to exchange culture and improve foreign language, which enable people in the world gain a fascinating insight into national identity. In addition, not only do the trend promote development but it also narrows prejudices among global different countries regarding culture, language and customs. Finally, compared to those who just live in their country, people regularly travelling or migrating permanently in other countries will gain more experiences about geography and history in different nations around the world.
On the other hand, the dramatic growth in the number of migrators and tourists also gives rise to several negative effects for natives' life. Indeed, the number of population rapidly increase, resulting in a concern of natural environment. For example, environmental protection will beyond governments' control such as throwing litters indiscriminately or spoilt beautiful landscapes. Furthermore, many people move freely and live in a country, causing an increasing in the demend of accommodaion, food and services in that nation. As a result, native people might face a lot of difficulties in living condition in daily life.
In conclusion, it seem to me that it is necessary for governments to control the number of tourists and migrators at a certain rate to ensure quality of citizens' life in each country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33762057878 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87213328658 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585209003215 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6028162798 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.692307692 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4615384615 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245483969431 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871577247836 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750274292486 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13247649466 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825789790208 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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