There have been many inventions in human history, such as wheels. Some people think that Internet is the most important invention. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the eye-catching development of modern network technology is encouraging people to put more value on the Internet. Some people argue that the invention of this network is of most important. I firmly agree with the opinion.
The appearance of the Internet is the most important invention because both individuals and companies have been deriving substantial benefits from it. First of all, the existence of this virtual network provides an innovative and rather appealing way for people. For instance, the search engines such as Google and Bing have started a great amount of knowledge in their database, attracting a large number of people to access it every day. In addition, the Internet has significantly improved the way modern businesses are conducted. This is because softwares like Skype and Google Duo have the capability of transmitting live video via the Internet, which effectively shorten the time needed to negotiate or sign an important contract, thereby improving the work efficiency.
Admittedly, opponents of the above views may argue that the Internet also has some drawbacks that may eradicate its benefits. In particular, it is pointed out that the online communicating through the Internet tends to reduce the possibility for people to establish authentic relationships with others, which impairs the development of people’s social skills. Nevertheless, this argument could not be completely validated. For example, it has been proved that social networks like Facebook and Wechat enable us to contact with our friends without the limitation of distance and time. Without these online activities, our sense of intimation with our friends would not has been strengthened. Therefore, it is not reasonable to say the Internet is making people alienated.
In conclusion, although the invention of the Internet does has some weaknesses, I am in support of the idea that it still is the most important invention in the world.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
'have/has' and 'may/can/would' are somehow over used, look:
individuals and companies have been deriving substantial benefits from it
Google and Bing have started a great amount of knowledge in their database
the Internet has significantly improved the way
Skype and Google Duo have the capability
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 309 350
No. of Characters: 1615 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.193 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.227 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.873 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.171 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.522 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...knowledge in their database, attracting a large number of people to access it every day. In addit...
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Line 3, column 673, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...f intimation with our friends would not has been strengthened. Therefore, it is not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36569579288 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00125129694 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3458653205 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.533333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1333333333 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237497694942 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779298769243 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634731785539 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155269791964 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350567974279 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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