In the growth of our society, the presence of numerous inventions has been strongly influencing human life. Based on this topic, some people argue that Internet is the most important progress. While I think that the Internet plays a huge role on satisfying our needs, other inventions are also vital.
On the one hand, there are some reasons can be identified to explain why the Internet is considered one of the most need tools. Firstly, the Internet has brought tremendous convenience into the lives of citizens since the day it appeared. For example, students nowadays can be able to take in new skills without coming to classes thanks to online learning. Secondly, Internet provides a boost to the innovation in other fields. Many highlights in healthcare service are the ones to be mentioned such as using Internet for surgery or giving patients advices through Internet.
On the other hand, other creations are also crucial to the development of human. Although Internet is wildly used in recent decades, it would not be useful if there were no supporting devices. The importance of technical machines like computers, laptops or mobile phones are which help Internet run and activated. Therefore, they are as vital as the Internet. Moreover, various inventions contribute to different aspects of life. For instance, wheel chair cannot be missed in giving assistance to the disabled or car is a must in evaluating transportation in long distances.
In conclusion, I believe that while Internet is an indispensable progress, other inventions have their own benefits and level of importance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'class'.
Suggestion: class
...to take in new skills without coming to classes thanks to online learning. Secondly, In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21705426357 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8492458706 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9087453127 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217048132341 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689960433932 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527046687397 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132818975772 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625495879441 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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