These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
We live in a world where we can easily travel to other countries than in the past. With the technological advances in transportation, travel time has gotten much shorter. For building up relationships with one another countries, pursuing globalization as a nation is important these days. Because people can get many kinds of advantages through the tour.
In terms of the cultural aspects, we can learn about other cultures and attitudes. At the same time, people can accept and apply some foreign cultures to their own country. Among this process, we can create fusion cultures. For example, cross-music is the kind of synthetic of different cultural kinds of music.
Furthermore, people can work wherever they want. People's skill of speaking a foreign language is more developed than past by better educations. Some people move around across the globes with earning money, because they don't need to stay in only one place. This could expand social relationships as an individual.
Some people don't tend to travel to other countries. They prefer a more familiar way of life than new things. It's true there are some risky points when you travel. Such as, we should consider unexpected accidents by flight or robbery in other countries. However, I'd say these cases are very seldom. It's important to be concerned, but we can't let it holds us back. There are even valuable moments when we travel to other countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05106382979 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6975165884 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651063829787 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1972663267 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.4736842105 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3684210526 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209259155077 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581647150524 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435749776211 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124371576319 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628600843219 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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