There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.
What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
These days, the topic of global warming makes headlines across the globe. This is one of the main issues that people should take into account as a serious problem and we have to come up with methods in order to prevent getting worse. This essay will explain several factors which kind of behaviour of people affected on the earth and I will opine on how we prevent the worse problem.
First of all, we need to pay attention to the common use of plastic. In fact, we are abusing it unconsciously. These plastics, such as plastic vinyl, packages will remain in the soil for a long time, and it takes a lot of time to dissolve. In the dissolving procedure, footprints that would devastate the ecological system occur in the air. It is already alarmed It has already warned us with the fact that the plate of ice which is the habitat for polar bears and other wild animals in Antarctica and the Arctic is being melted.
It has seen that lots of areas in Brazil are demolished by farming. People got rid of the immense size of the forest which is essential to circulate the air on the earth. The forest is granted that lung of the earth, which plays a crucial role to produce oxygen in the earth. However, the forest is dissipating. We have been facing this problem.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that the behaviour of people has to do with the fact that global temperatures increased. Whatever it takes, we should take measures to prevent situations that would be more harmful to nature. We can start with the simple way, for example, when we go shopping, we must carry our own bag in order to reduce the use of plastic. Furthermore, many people practice not using a private car when they go a short distance.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52733118971 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42290159214 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7538217398 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8235294118 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160500428331 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476498811512 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473690125024 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092562257186 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497729624927 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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