The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When you choose a job or any career, probably you should consider which condition is the best for you. There are some options you have to figure out the preferences, such as the amount of income or how long you must work in a day or the strength of working quality and so on. What is the most important? This may different one another.
Firstly, some people would choose the amount of income as the most premier consideration. Because it’s one of the basic reasons why we work. For maintaining stable living, reasonable payment is necessary. If you earn affluent money, you can buy as many things as you want. You can prospect positive future in a better financial situation.
Having said that, some people give up high income conditions though they could afford it. Instead of earning more money, the other things are more dominant to them. Because high income normally could bring the other drawback. For example, you might have less rest time or you have to endure extreme conservative office society. Therefore, people end up choosing other career conditions.
I’d say there is no right answer. For giving better financial condition to your family, you will tend to choose higher payment. To sum up, you need to consider what would be beneficial to you. How much you could enjoy your work even if you get low payment, and how long you could satisfy high income even if you hardly rest on weekends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...other things are more dominant to them. Because high income normally could bring the ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77551020408 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39785410104 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604081632653 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0546995276 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6111111111 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309222472043 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972067877333 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875670349845 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198602516848 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722495622907 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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