There have been significant reforms to people's life due to technological and scientific advancements, however, creative individuals such as singers, writers, and painters are still considered as most valuable people. This essay will discuss the significance of arts in our lives and how it is more valuable than scientific developments which make our life simpler.
Despite numerous benefits which science brings to our lives, like the development of medicine, globalization, and the internet, artists are still seen as role models are considered valuable people because they can connect with people's emotions. Not only do they portray their unique thoughts in the form of art, but they also let people see the world through a bigger lens. Consequently, by showing their talent they make our inner soul happier and hold a larger place in our hearts. Musicians, like Kurt Kobain, are famous all across the world because of their unique talent which people admire.
People associated with science and technology, on the other hand, despite bringing significant changes in our lives, are less valued as compared to artists because there is nothing creative in their work that could be admired by the public. In other words, almost every engineer or scientist works tirelessly and follows the same daily routine to accomplish their task, and what people see in their lives is the end-result of the hard work of these professionals, not their blood and sweat they have to devote to develop something. In countries, like India, engineers and scientists are not much valued as compared to celebrities because these artists can establish a bond with people.
In a nutshell, in almost every country, creative individuals, like musicians and painters are more famous and successful as compared to people who are associated with technology; the talent of these artists are admired by the citizens of any country because artists showcase their talent and can make people’s soul happy by connecting with their hearts. On the contrary, people like engineers, who work all day and night are not able to show their hard work to people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, still, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20348837209 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69378102164 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505813953488 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9481470166 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.727272727 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2727272727 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17474032668 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701232777584 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547608735276 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111738467713 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358308177433 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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