Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In contemporary era, people are more attracted to purchase well-known products rather than the stuffs they are really in need of. Admittedly, this is a direct result of counterfeit and at the same time attractive advertisement in a global market. From my perspective, I would totally support this assertion relying on striking reasons along with reliable instances.
To begin with the reasons of preference of people spending money on impractical products at a current time, I would put a light on leading reason which is gullible markets. To put it more simply, people are subtly made to buy some products in an unfair way by applying some deceitful methods by some firms. Obviously, every firm or company earn huge profits by stimulating demand for their products, hence a pioneer section including well-informed along with skilled advertisement experts and highly knowledgeable employees, can be easily found in every successful organization. These experts have a number of duties to perform such as, how physiologically effect on customer's mind to purchase something even it is useless or impractical through some productive techniques namely celebrity endorsement, catchy slogans or a powerful product name.
Turning to another significant point, people are easily made to purchase some products by sustained experts' efforts on selling their goods, whereas people are not alert about it at all. This fact can be illustrated by a recent instance of a 56- Italian woman who bought a dog food after just five seconds, that she had seen its advertisement on TV, however what really puts me in a total shock about her is, she has not got a dog. What we encountered in this real example, that is being impressed by one advertisement, can be applied to most of our shopping.additionally,the unbelievable fact is, the cycle of buying things which are completely malfunction can repeat for every member of society due to the up-to-date knowledge of marketing experts about their potential customers.
By way of conclusion, I strongly agree with quick decision which is made by a vast majority of people to buy some stuffs merely because of its attractive appearance rather than its productivity. Clearly people are not aware, nonetheless this happening is due to effective company's advertisements in this cut-throat marketing competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, nonetheless, really, second, so, well, whereas, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28418230563 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21287248055 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605898123324 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3084068598 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.25 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0833333333 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834011238323 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292781054081 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214947934573 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508447149446 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00766755508152 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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