today, the highest sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, we can easily see advertisements everywhere from television to the streets. Some people believe that advertisement can boost the amount of consumption while others state that customers buy goods but they do not need them. In my opinion, I totally agree with the first idea. I will discuss both views in my essay.
on the one hand, advertisement is a good way to introduce products. Companies can show features of their products to the customers by using television commercial. Also, products appear in advertisement with a gorgeous appearance beside a very popular singer or a famous actor. Moreover, advertisements keep repeating when people watch movies or listen to music on youtube and other websites. It always shows all the best features and good quality that affect customers so that they can easily make a decision to buy without enough consideration. I have a friend who usually buys products due to its advertising campaign although she does not really need them.
On the other hand, people make their own choice to buy goods. Advertising can not affect them even a product is on-trend. Depend on how much their disposable income, they have to allocate their budgets before deciding to buy something. Individuals have different income and habits so nothing can affect their choice. In addition, no one can judge the products are necessary for society or not, so that consumers may not be swayed by advertisement. For example, Apple company always releases a new edition of iPhone, it attracts many people especially youngster. In contrast, there is a range of smartphones offer the same features or functions can meet the need of customers.
In conclusion, I believe that advertisement can not affect someone to buy goods due to their incomes and habits. It is hard to say that today consumers make a decision based on advertisement and people buy goods even they do not need them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04746835443 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89312340469 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560126582278 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4315859978 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9473684211 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6315789474 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161298663049 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524599202948 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569555480633 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123901361049 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055063576973 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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