The bar chart illustrates how much time men and women spending their time to do housework per day in the United Kingdom

Essay topics:

The bar chart illustrates how much time men and women spending their time to do housework per day in the United Kingdom.

The bar chart illustrates how much time men and women spending their time to do housework per day in the United Kingdom.
Overall, women spend more time on doing household tasks than their male counterparts, except gardening, pet care, and maintenance odd jobs. It is also clear that females spend the most on doing kitchen tasks, while gardening and pet care are the most-consuming chores for men.
It can be seen from the chart that women spend an average of 75 minutes a day on doing kitchen tasks as opposed to only 30 minutes spent by their men counterparts. Similarly, women spend over twice as much time on caring for and playing with their own children as men, with the figures being 45 minutes and about 20 minutes respectively. It is readily apparent that women are more active in house cleaning and tidying than men (almost an hour and 12 minutes respectively). The biggest difference t is seen in the washing, ironing and sewing category on which women spend 25 minutes, compared with few less than 5 minutes spent by their men counterparts.
In contrast, men spend 50 minutes per day on gardening and pet care, whereas their female counterparts dedicate only half of that amount. Also, 25 minutes are spent by men on maintenance odd jobs, compared with nearly 10 minutes spent by women.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79111111111 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60730218643 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542222222222 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0672661023 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.777777778 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442244088826 0.215688989381 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227106928589 0.103423049105 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.278146984952 0.0843802449381 330% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.391154914688 0.15604864568 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.352984908175 0.0819641961636 431% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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