In general, people tend to demand something. Demands are not just categorized as fundamental physiological needs but also as spiritual too. For example; people want shelter, food, water which are basic needs, after providing those may want things better than oneself. These things could be money, home, car, job, dress etc.
Advertising and marketing are important features for selling goods. Imagine, you are watching a film at the cinema. Before showing the film, some advertisements are being shown on the screen. This may be a promo of film or a beverage advertising. As long as watching them, advertisements can manipulate your choices.
Manipulation has always been our lives. For example; in the cosmetic industry, lots of advertisements are displayed on TV, on billboards even on social media. They promise to conceal our flaws to make us more beautiful. Then people begin to obtain that product whatever its cost. Then takes another, another and so on. Everybody has flaws, so who has not? However, I want to stress a point that the majority of advertisements show us our fault, need or deficiency. That triggered us to buy this "miracle" products. Shopping may give you more pleasure than the products. People are getting more demanding and tend to become addicted.
People have seen something which others have and say why I do not or I have to get this, either. In order to satisfy our urges, we always buy a product even it is useless. I think advertising companies do their best efforts to make more appealing products. For these reasons, I should say that we must stop the consuming madness and alter our habits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, for example, i think, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01098901099 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8905346559 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1204282771 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.4782608696 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8695652174 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.08695652174 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0973488757431 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242558713438 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232816311998 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561531703857 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015859062416 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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