Today, more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?
We today are witnessing a surge in international travel more than ever before due to effects of globalization. While this trend can be resulted for some reasons, travelers obviously gain many benefits.
In terms of causes, tourism sectors in many countries are experiencing unprecedented phenomenal growth for some reasons. Firstly, residents nowadays are provided with modern transporting facilities, which are more affordable and accessible than before. Visitors who settle down in America now can have a whale of time in the Great Wall of China, a breathtaking attraction of China, after only a few hours of flight. Secondly, the advents of state-of-the-art technologies are considered as a boost to tourism developments. Many museums and historical sites nowadays allocate more resources on installing virtual exhibiting systems, in which tourists are offered unforgettable experiences in the dinosaur era or ancient cultures.
From a positive perspective, these improvements are bringing visitors to amazing benefits. Firstly, most people find themselves gaining valuable knowledge as traveling is becoming easier. Apart from workplaces and schools, modern citizens nowadays are provided with a great deal of opportunities to expand their horizons thanks to wildlife safaris, foreign friends and remote countries. Secondly, the increasing trend of the number of travelers does not only help to build up economic background but also enables humans to have a better mental healthcare. Since most people easily feel exhausted because of keeping up with fast the pace of modern lives, they completely can get away from it all through a city break at a particular beach without breaking the bank.
In conclusion, while we are aware of many reasons behind the success of the tourism sector of many nations, these developments clearly are beneficial for travelers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57746478873 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08923041784 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658450704225 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6034418145 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208120915537 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717388767427 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967047692336 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136663016612 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139793236741 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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