Today our communications, medicine and transport system all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Nowadays, technology is more developed. Recently all people depend on technology. Without, computers they can not do anything and computer is a primary requirement of person. All technology have own advantages and disadvantages.
Today, all department and sector is depend on computer such as business, pharma sector, communication etc. Technology is made their work more easly. For, the example a small accounting form their primary requirement is computer because without computer they can not write account. They can easily find which party payment due or receive. They have no any burden and they live relax.
However, computer is more important in pharma sector. They have not require to remember which medicine where place and which department. They are easily maintained stocks.
Technology is upgraded after that people became more lazy because, they need any item they can purchase online. People always doing communication on computer so that they think not necessary get together. Reliance in all work done on computer.
To sum up, technology us important but its use more than they create some problem. I believe computer is necessary in all sector but its use limited.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...s. Today, all department and sector is depend on computer such as business, pharma se...
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Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he example a small accounting form their primary requirement is computer because ...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...party payment due or receive. They have no any burden and they live relax. Howeve...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...portant in pharma sector. They have not require to remember which medicine where place ...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remembering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: remembering
...in pharma sector. They have not require to remember which medicine where place and which de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3422459893 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75683879504 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 29.1647272382 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.7647058824 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.0 20.7667163134 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.11764705882 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174175067135 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660233474193 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470553901523 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113227951198 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514021991087 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.51 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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