In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Hitherto, globalization has led to the demand for investigating science researches, and the question of whether the self-conducting research is better than those of government has been raising public attention. While many people lament that they should be able to make spontaneous research, I oppose this view by giving some rational evidence.
It is perceptible that due to the curiosity of science world, people in this day and age try to discover it by their own companies. People believe that they can dedicate to the scientific industry by giving many aspects of one investigation, so that will provide a variety of stand points to other people. Furthermore, the flexibility is also another factors that foster residents to conduct researches, people will not have to wait for authority’s allowance which frequently takes tons of times.
Beside these benefits, there are many potential drawbacks that people have not recognized yet. The upper-most disadvantage is that these research is not legit, almost prevailing professional research must require a qualification from government, or at least the conductor have enough knowledge in the investigated field. On top of that, normal investigation can not appeal expert due to the shortage of budget and liability, instead government research can easily attract scientists’ attention. What’s more, the outbreak of scientific research can create an era of which investigation lost its value. An vivid example is that in Vietnam, the government is trying to limit the illegal research, so that they can control the authenticity of each scientific discovery.
In conclusion, people should have authority’s allowance to conduct the research, and there is no way that the advantage of spontaneous investigation outweigh those with government
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...r investigating science researches, and the question of whether the self-conducting research is better ...
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...scover it by their own companies. People believe that they can dedicate to the sc...
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Suggestion: A
... of which investigation lost its value. An vivid example is that in Vietnam, the g...
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...nd there is no way that the advantage of spontaneous investigation outweigh those...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, then, while, at least, in conclusion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53260869565 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19362838083 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.7704155172 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.818181818 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190814930206 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693348199836 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489888525902 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119327003529 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361322496242 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.