Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving.
Nowadays, people in every corner of the world usually keep animals and take care of them not only for foods but also for making friendship between people themselves and their pets. Obviously, keeping pets has both of pros and cons and lots of people strongly believe that money should be spent for poorer all over the world in stead of for pets. Personally, I totally disagree with this statement.
First of all, there are a lot of advantages people can take from keeping pets. Indeed, everyone needs friends to share and release work burdens, especially for those who are living in hustle and bustl...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
... be spent for poorer all over the world in stead of for pets. Personally, I totally disagre...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
...s usually eat whatever people give them in stead of hunting their preys like fishes or mous...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ng pets as our friends because of their much benefits for our lives and to help the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in fact, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 464.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78879310345 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38659242949 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474137931034 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9336215987 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6086956522 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1739130435 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4347826087 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196386354536 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652396458443 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611116219877 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13445069163 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478981401457 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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