Topic 6: Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problem does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
Investing large budgets for advertising and promotion is concentrated by large companies to gravitate towards people to own their goods. There are several problems caused by this and various remedies could be taken to improve the situation.
On the one hand, some issues caused by over marketing and sale need to be concentrated. One of the major problems related to this is that making customers tend to overspend on products that may not necessary. For instance, people from all walks of life are tempted to plash money on the latest model of the iPhone while they can not use all the functions of this device. In addition, another challenge from this phenomenon is small local businesses have to face going out of the market. To be more detailed, because of the intense competition in the sale, that kind of shop may lose customers quickly and suffer from the economic burden.
On the other hand, some serious attempts must be made to remedy the situation. First, the government should have the responsibility for providing support for local businesses. For instance, reducing the tax on products and raising people's awareness about the benefits of locally produced merchandise is needed to be considered and take into practice. Furthermore, not only for authorities' charge but domestic businesses also have to enhance their own groceries. To exemplify, companies need to apply innovative marketing strategies or improve the quality of merchandise to provide the best for customers.
To sum up, although some troubles can be attributable to this development and mainly for the national market, they can be tackled by appropriate steps such as encourage buyers and upgrade production facilities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2299270073 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85891313333 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1993167414 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331737454165 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106432011994 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607367073274 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200307765916 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648897610618 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.