Topic: Researcher shows that global warming is caused by human activity. What are the possible reasons and effects of climate change and what can government and individuals do to reduce these?
People say that human make the environment polluted. Wtihin the scope of this writing, some reasons and effects will be discussed and fromm then impacts will be mentioned.
As the beginning part of this discussion, causes are worth mentioning initially. In this way, we can see that human daily activities lead to pollution. In detail, when removing the old things, it means that people will throw away a number of rubbish to the environment. Overpopulation leads to amount of garbage discharged into the environment is raising. For example, most plastics are not biodegradable and they remain as waste products in the environment for thousands of years, which is the main reasons make environment more and more polluted. Besides, scientists say that global warming partly stems from the increase in car exhaust emissions. Additionally, the cause to this matter can be found in the fact that the problem is caused by activities of industry. Specifically, nowadays, more and more company and industrial zones have been discharging chemical waste into rivers, causing death to many fish and other aquatic animals. Furthermore, exploiting natural resources to product goods without plans is increasing the greenhouse effect and making the Earth hotter, endangering all life on the planet. To illustrate, some timber companies depleted natural resources by cutting down trees without planting new trees to replace them. From this, an endangered species is the lowland gorilla, which has almost disappeared as a result of the destruction of its forest habitat. Lastly, we can see that there have been numerous international conferences to warn of the dangers, but many governments have refused to take action on global warming. In reality, in 2017, United States ceased all participation in the 2015 Paris Agreement on climate change mitigation, even though it is one of the countries with the most industrial emissions in the world. Therefore, the environmental problem is still serious until nowadays.
There will undoubtedly be some detrimental consequences. This is to say, environmental degradation is caused by human activities such as throwing away a number of rubbish to the environment, cutting down trees, building more factories provoking an ecological crisis which endangering all life on the planet. One example of an endangered species is the lowland gorilla, which has almost disappeared as a result of the destruction of its forest habitat. Furthermore, there is a rise in the number of carbon footprint from cars, motorbikes and industrial zones... emitted into the nature, so the major environmental challenge which faces humanity today is greenhouse effect and global warming. These results in human's illness such as cancers or lung problems. In addition, a look further into other consequences for natural resources. It means, people have to exploit a big proportion of metal such as lead, copper, coal... in order to develop the modern industry. However, unless we consume less of the Earth’s natural resources, it will be impossible to fight climate change and safeguard our future.
Tacking such problem is not simple, there are some measures can be taken. It is the time the government promoted laws to protect the environment. For example, companies which discharge chemical waste from their factories into the sea or into rivers must be held accountable for their actions and be fined heavily. Nevertheless, local authority must invest in renewable energy projects in order to reduce our dependence on fossil fuels. They should also encourage social campaigns to use detergents and cosmetic that are environmentally friendly. In addition, a look further into other solution to this issue is from schools. One recommendation is for teacher to teach children the importance of natural environment. From this, students should join one of the organisations which form part of the green movement, in order to campaign for changes in official policy on the environment. It would not be complete if we neglect a solution from families. It means parents should set good role models in the effort to alleviate environmental problems in the local community through simple actions such as recycling waste, planting a tree in their garden or cutting down on emissions from their cars.
In conclusion, some causes of this problem can be indentified and the serious effects on society must not be underestimated as well as the solutions must be taken to achieve subtainable development.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 13.1623246493 258% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 100.0 41.998997996 238% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3790.0 1615.20841683 235% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 712.0 315.596192385 226% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32303370787 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.16559078211 4.20363070211 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97461697844 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 351.0 176.041082164 199% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49297752809 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1170.0 506.74238477 231% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 16.0721442886 230% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.037701766 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.432432432 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2432432432 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89189189189 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124284533866 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301461112137 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351213050238 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074960018859 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330166971736 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 190.0 78.4519038076 242% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 13.1623246493 258% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 100.0 41.998997996 238% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3790.0 1615.20841683 235% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 712.0 315.596192385 226% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32303370787 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.16559078211 4.20363070211 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97461697844 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 351.0 176.041082164 199% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49297752809 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1170.0 506.74238477 231% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 16.0721442886 230% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.037701766 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.432432432 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2432432432 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89189189189 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124284533866 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301461112137 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351213050238 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074960018859 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330166971736 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 190.0 78.4519038076 242% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.