training parents for bringing their children
In recent decades, and due to the technology development, the shape of growing children up also have changed completely in compared to the past. This event maybe create some problem for parents. Some people believe that parents should spend a training course for upbringing their children. I am strongly agree with this idea for several reasons. Two of the most important my reasons have mentioned as follows.
Participate parents in training course can help to demonstrate a right reaction to the children behavior. These days, children access to the information such as, picture, film, documents etc. through media like internet, and TV have much easy. Nonetheless, among whole of the beneficial subjects, some of these information may be have detrimental influences on the children. The kind of parents reaction about it، can have destructive impacts on children at the future such as, join gangs or juvenile delinquency. Recent research show that, the banning of the children from using internet or social media have a reverse result, likewise absolute freedom also, has a deleterious effects. Unfortunately, majority of parents select one of the above ways. I think if they spend a training course, it assists them to get a right decision when confront with this problem.
Not having enough time for being with children can influence on the shape of their upbringing. Nowadays, male and female are have to work as full-time job because of economy problem. The lack of closeness in families can have a negative impact on children. therefore, utilizing from a right method for bringing children up is seemed vital. If the families attend in training courses, they getting to know with the behavior of new generation and thus, they can respond better and sooner to their child’s wishes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...pbringing their children. I am strongly agree with this idea for several reasons. Two...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reaction to the children behavior. These days, children access to the information...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...ole of the beneficial subjects, some of these information may be have detrimental influences on t...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...bsolute freedom also, has a deleterious effects. Unfortunately, majority of parents sel...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...bringing. Nowadays, male and female are have to work as full-time job because of eco...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, i think, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22336769759 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74169093653 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611683848797 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3767869653 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369078406769 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107365565351 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106044643105 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249193648067 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357378415401 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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