Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past years, the gender problems in educational activities have become a subject of increasing control in many countries. There is an opinion that universities should fill any course with equal number of girls and boys. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this idea.
On the one hand, ensuring the balance of gender in every subjects is relatively impossible. In fact, each gender is a natural at different certain fields, therefore, some subjects are top priorities of either male or female students when they register their major in university. For example, genetically females have knack for languages, which is a main reason why language lessons attract more number of girls than boys. It is likely that it would be infeasible for educators to fill any course with similar numbers of both genders.
On the other hand, it would be unfair if admission to university courses were based on gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates according to their qualifications and capabilities. It would create equal opportunities for both sexes and they know that they need to work hard and achieve great grades at school to get success. If a female students is the best candidate for a place in a course, it is wrong to reject her in favor of male one with lower grades and fewer qualifications.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the idea that universities should ensure equal numbers of female and male students in all courses, since it is impossible and discriminated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
...s at school to get success. If a female students is the best candidate for a place in a ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.064 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89408776646 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4931451329 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262924718155 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935118555139 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770895877924 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18052021726 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763308448221 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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