Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past years, the idea of gender equality have become a subject of increasing concern in the modern society. Many people argue that universities in which should be filled by the same proportions of students in each gender. However, in my opinion, I totally disagree with this idea.
On the one hand, the practice of having the exact 1:1 male-to-female ratio in all academic areas is relatively impossible. In fact, each gender is a natural at different certain fields. Therefore, some professions are dominated by either males or females, it means that it cannot expect to see equal number of students both boys and girls. For example, genetically females have knack for languages, which is a main reason why language lessons attract more number of girls than boys. It is likely that it would be infeasible for tertiary institutions to keep balance in numbers of boys and girls in all courses.
On the other hand, it would be unfair if admission to university courses were based on gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates according to their qualifications and abilities. It would create equal opportunities for both sexes and they know that they need to work hard and achieve great grades at school to get success. If a female students is the best candidate for a place in a course, it is wrong to reject her in favor of male one with lower grades and fewer qualifications.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the idea that universities should ensure equal numbers of female and male students in all courses, since it is impossible and discriminated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
...s at school to get success. If a female students is the best candidate for a place in a ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97388059701 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87659948049 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5857993227 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.538461538 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256789289813 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854149409168 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748682347914 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17624814112 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784005135319 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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