The use of mobile phone is an antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics: The use of mobile phone is an antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is sometimes argued that utilizing mobile phone like smoking might be prohibited as an antisocial activity in special spots. While I accept that individuals grow accustomed phone to using mobile phone under any circumstances, I believe that imposing some strict laws are necessary in some situation.

There are a small amount of reason that I would argue that the use of mobile phone might be forbidden. Firstly, most people are addicted to carry their cell phone every place like exactly smoking cigarette which may interrupt other people’s sleep, thoughts , concertation and sort of things. In hospital, for example, calling the phone or the constantly its ring disturb peace of patients. Secondly, one reason is that the young people at college or university instead of listening the lectures are surfing in the Internet or playing popular games. As a result, the dean imposes some strict regulation about bring mobile phone to class or they have to turn theirs off by end of the class.

On the other hand, mobile phone plays an inseparable role in people’s lives. So most people have such a device along themselves and handle variety activities through it from keeping in touch with family and friend to checking emails(Conversely, having mobile phone make people isolated).for instance, the chair man and colleagues at the meeting work their mobile phone to explain their the result of reports which they collect in their phone. In other words some families have children, grandma or grandpa that keep in touch with them when gone out because one of them might have a auditory problem and so on.

To conclusion, working with mobile phone or dragging cigarette are antisocial activities that it is better to abandon them in some places such as in hospital or university .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, sort of, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10204081633 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70496526916 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585034013605 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3127962111 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.363636364 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268815970365 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119145420307 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742334813098 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18653855696 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049780737304 0.056905535591 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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