Water is need of every living soul on this earth.but according the some researchers ,in future water will create the greatest threat for mankind .do you agree or disagree?
"Thousand have lived without love, not one without water." Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocably and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that; water, should be creating the greatest threat in the future for new generation, but, why this is happening in future ? It is burning question of today, because, water is an essential for living things, but, scientists said that water will create the critical situation in the scenario. I agree with this statement, I shall explore the plethora of aspects of following paraphrase;
To begin with, a fresh water is significant role in the life of living creature, but, industries had been responsible to rose water pollution in the era, and, wastage of water.in addition to this, It was being destroyed harmful chemicals in the; pond and river. That is highly effective on marine and plants, mankind life, however,They have been grown- up dangerous diseases to wastage and polluted for fresh water. In the modern scenario, the numerous people are effected of critical disease; cancer and jaundice.The best epitome of this is, the "Japanese" people had been suffered from dangerous diseases, because, it is industrializing era, the Hindustan times was conducted survey in this country, and, realize that; a plenty of factories destroyed the natural source of water and grown- up harmful diseases in the nation.
Furthermore, the domestic use of water is necessary of individual life, but, illetrate people were consumed and wasted of water; bathing, clothing and so on. Due to this cause, nowadays, the level of water have been reduced in many countries. The best epitome of this is, the rural area people are used to numerous of water in the lifestyle. The farmer is dropping a pesticides in huge amount of earth,so, that is overcome poisonous in the water. One is major reason for that is; renewable source on an earth, but, that bad impact will slumping a greatest threat for new- generation.
To crown it all, I would at that; government, should have aware and motivate of people to protect the water source on an earth and do counseling use a quote " save a water, and save a life of all creatures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07923497268 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85609798432 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4872735715 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.916666667 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365145726878 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141986466363 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06665814602 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221857606487 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906041310415 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.