The way you live is determined by your society. In some societies, you are free to live in your way; in some others, you have to keep the socially set standards. Which way do you prefer?
People in different corners of the world vary from each other in terms of their own official religion, local culture and especially personal lifestyles. Obviously, the way people live their lives will be shaped and established by the distinctive culture they live in: universally or particularly. Personally, of the two mentioned, the former, or the universal culture is more preferable for people living to set norms will help maintain social order, ensure substantial development, and lessen any possible risk as well.
Secondly, substantial development is obviously ensured with a universal culture where people live to set rules and regulations. In fact, some people disagree with the statement when they claim that there are many factors affecting the development of a country, including geographical location and resources such as natural resources and labors as well. Certainly, it is true that these factors have a powerful influence on the growth of a country. However, in many circumstances, the competition ability of some countries are lower than others whereas they have a lot of advantages in that factors. Clearly, a country setting norms in an efficient way that all people have to follow will ensure not only high growth rate but also remain the sustainable development. For example, Germany, being known as the most disciplined country, is one of the most developed countries in the world whereas the country had undertaken serious damages in the Second World War. In comparison, despite having strongly suitable location to trade with a lot of countries, various kinds of resource and especially a large workforce, Vietnam still remains a low growth rate because of lack of clear rules and law. Clearly, if all people in a society follow established norms dutifully, the country is not also ensured to remain the stability, but also further develop. Equally, there are many factors that impact on the growth of a country, it is always true that the advanced norms in a universal country play a principal role in substantial development insurance.
Because of their differences in ideology, communal customs and practices, as well as individual insight and outlook, thanks to which people’s lifestyles are mounted and determined either universally or particularly, most seem to follow the easier-to-adapt culture of the global preference for a social order maintenance, substantial development assurance and risk reduction
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'norm'?
Suggestion: norm
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Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, for example, in fact, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40208877285 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02830194279 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530026109661 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6154283714 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.153846154 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4615384615 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108506151443 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429747151882 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451186634388 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784774637331 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310288158652 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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