"Traditional holidays are getting more and more unpopular among the young generations."
Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
OR: what extent do you agree/disagree with the statement? Give specific reasons and examples for your argument so that any non-experts in the matter can understand that.
Culture is not only referred to the way of life by a society, but also become a symbol of each country in the world. However, it is said that young people are showing fewer interests in traditional holidays of their own culture. Personally, I completely agree with the statement for impacts of economics development and the awareness of traditional holidays is less concerned in most young generation as well.
Firstly, development in global economy has cultural impacts in countries in the world nowadays. As a result, there are many relax activities that people can enjoy easily in daily life, instead of waiting for traditional holidays. It is in Hanoi of Vietnam, on the weekend, entertainments such as music concerts, sport activities and even folk games are available. In addition, a lot of people prefer to work in these holidays for earning more money. For example, in Vietnam, Tet Holiday is not interested as much as before when more people have concerned about how much money they can generate during these holidays. By mentioned above, despite development of global economics, the traditional holidays are less attractive in the young generations.
Secondly, one reason is the lack of awareness of these traditional holidays. However, some arguments that nowadays, it is possible that people can learn traditional holidays of foreign countries easily. Clearly, thanks to technology development, culture communication and exchange among countries around the world are widely opened. However, the truth is most young people follow cultural trends without understanding the cultural origin and meaning. As an illustration, Asian countries open more widely to the others so many East cultural holidays, such as Christmas or Halloween day were imported into the countries. What is mentioning is that a lot of people are interested in these holidays rather than really understanding about them. Additionally, it is so dangerous that people no longer understand their own traditional holidays fully. For example, it would seem that few Vietnamese people can know well what Mid-Autumn Festival originate and its meaning. Clearly, when young people don’t understand the cultural significance of these traditional holidays, it is very difficult for them to enjoy and protect them. In a nutshell, it is so necessary that young generations have to improve their knowledge of cultural holidays of other countries in the world.
Despite significance of culture in referring to lifestyle of a society and sometime representing the best tradition of a country, the traditional holidays become more unpopular among the young generations for rapid development of technology in the last century and the absence of knowledge in traditional culture of their own countries and others as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2358.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39588100686 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00198308712 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 760.5 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.339928115 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.9 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.85 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178912443209 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058706223191 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464692929501 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125531210561 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021336973714 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.