"Traditional holidays are getting more and more unpopular among the young generations."
Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
OR: what extent do you agree/disagree with the statement? Give specific reasons and examples for your argument so that any non-experts in the matter can understand that.
Culture is not only referred as the way of life by a community or a society, but also become a symbol of each country in the world. However, it is said that young people are showing less interests in traditional holidays of their own culture. Personally, I completely agree with the statement for nowadays, technology breakthrough has significantly affected the young and the awareness of traditional holidays is less concerned in most young generation as well.
First of all, development in global economy has deeply cultural impacts in countries in the world nowadays. As the result, people can relax and entertain easily in daily life, instead of waiting for traditional holidays. It is in Hanoi of Vietnam, there are many entertainment activities during the weekend, including music concerts, sport activities and even folk games. In addition, working in these holidays for earning more money is prefered. For example, in Vietnam, Tet Holiday is not interesting as much as before when more people have concerned about how much money they can generate during these holidays, rather than enjoying them. In contrast, the busy working hard in daily life just waits for refreshment and breathing space, they don't really interest in preparing or enjoying with Tet. By the three mentioned above, despite global economics development, it is reduces the attraction to traditional holidays.
Secondly, it is said that one season is the lack of awareness of these traditional holidays among the young. Obviously, some arguments that nowadays, it is possible when people learn traditional holidays of foreign countries easily. Clearly, thanks to technology development, people around the world can communicate and exchange information with other openly. However, the truth is most young people follow cultural trends in the world without understanding their cultural origin and meaning. It is in many Asia countries, as the countries open more widely to the others in the world, many East cultural holidays, such as Christmas or Halloween day imported into the countries. What is mentioning is that a lot of people are interested in these holidays rather than really understanding about them. Additionally, it is so dangerous that people no longer understand their own traditional holidays fully. For example, it would seem that few Vietnamese people can know well what Mid-Autumn Festival originate and its meaning. Clearly, when young people misunderstand the cultural significance of these traditional holidays, it is very difficult for them to enjoy and protect them. In a nutshell, it is so necessary that young generations have to improve their knowledge of cultural holidays of other countries in the world.
Despite significance of culture in referring to lifestyle of a society and sometime representing the best tradition of a country, the traditional holidays become more unpopular among the young generations for rapid development of technology in the last century and the absence of knowledge in traditional culture of their own countries and others as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun interests is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Line 2, column 745, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r refreshment and breathing space, they dont really interest in preparing or enjoyin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2587.0 1615.20841683 160% => OK
No of words: 482.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36721991701 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96022905265 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470954356846 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1663443794 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.19047619 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9523809524 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166654349503 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557731976735 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457825892847 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120623834039 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255700178085 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.