The way you live is determined by your society. In some societies, you are free to live in your way; in some others, you have to keep the socially set standards. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People in different corners of the world vary from each other in terms of their own official religion, local culture and especially personal lifestyle. Obviously, the way people live their lives will be shaped and established by the distinctive culture they live in: universally or particularly. Personally, of the two mentioned, the former, or the universal culture, is more preferable for people living to set norms will help maintain social order, ensure substantial development, and lessen any possible risks as well.
First of all, living in the universal culture will help maintain law and order. Actually, countries that follow the universal culture create and build law and regulation which are more global and comprehensive than others. It is in Germany, where has restrict regulations of smoking in public place, but there is not in Vietnam. In addition, people living in the culture almost completely follow the law and regulations set by the government and local community. Specifically, when buying any goods or services, German almost always stand in lines without feeling unpleasant or angry. By the two mentioned above, it is sure that in these countries, there are less irregular and illegal behaviors than others. Actually, according to statistic, complying with the law and order in countries following the universal culture such as Germany, New Zealand, Singapore… is obviously better than others. That’s why law and regulations are created, applied and maintained efficiently in the universal culture.
Secondly, substantial development is obviously ensured with a universal culture where people live to set rules and regulations. In fact, some people disagree with the statement when they claim that there are many factors affecting the development of a country, including geographical location and resources such as natural resources and labors as well. Certainly, it is true that these factors have a powerful influence on the growth of a country. However, in many circumstances, the competition ability of some countries are lower than others whereas they have a lot of advantages in that factors. Clearly, a country setting norms in an efficient way that all people have to follow will ensure not only high growth rate but also remain the sustainable development. For example, Germany, being known as the most disciplined country, is one of the most developed countries in the world whereas the country had undertaken serious damages in the Second World War. In comparison, despite having strongly suitable location to trade with a lot of countries, various kinds of resource and especially a large workforce, Vietnam still remains a low growth rate because of lack of clear rules and law. Clearly, if all people in a society follow established norms dutifully, the country is not also ensured to remain the stability, but also further develop. Equally, there are many factors that impact on the growth of a country, it is always true that the advanced norms in a universal country play a principal role in substantial development insurance.
Because of their differences in ideology, communal customs and practices, as well as individual insight and outlook, thanks to which people's lifestyles are mounted and determined either universally or particularly, most prefer to follow the easier-to-adapt culture of the global preference for a social order maintenance, substantial development assurance and risk reduction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'restricted'.
Suggestion: restricted
...han others. It is in Germany, where has restrict regulations of smoking in public place,...
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Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'norm'?
Suggestion: norm
...hat factors. Clearly, a country setting norms in an efficient way that all people hav...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ctors. Clearly, a country setting norms in an efficient way that all people have to follow will ens...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2916.0 1615.20841683 181% => OK
No of words: 539.0 315.596192385 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41001855288 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9721150968 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482374768089 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 917.1 506.74238477 181% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4424409261 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.857142857 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975230484941 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324764086583 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354794272536 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671050664089 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257166705817 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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