“Traditional holidays are getting more and more unpopular among the young generations.”
Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
OR: what extent do you agree/disagree with the statement? Give specific reasons and examples for your argument so that any non-experts in the matter can understand that.
Traditional holidays obviously play significant roles in creating a strong attachment to people. However, youngsters seem less appreciate traditional holidays than the previous generations. In my point of view, I agree with this statement on the account of technological development, spending much time for working.
First and foremost, technological development is obviously the reason why traditional holidays become less common among generation for spending much time to interact on the internet, too respect the relationship on it and. Formerly, young generations spend too much time on social media such as facebook, twitter and instagram. As an illustration, a high school student usually spends almost all his family reunion time on Tet holiday to chat with friends on facebook and ignores his family members; therefore, he will feel this holiday is really boring. Equally important, young people show great respect for the relationship on social media. For instance, a young person spends most time in his family gathering on Christmas Day to congratulate New Year’s eva his friends on twitter and does not say happy New Year to his family members. Obviously, technological development creates distance between people on traditional holidays.
Furthermore, youngsters take less interest in traditional holidays because of spending too much time on their own work. In practice, lots of people think that working does not relate to traditional holiday interest of young generations; living diversity is the main reason. Obviously, living diversity contributes to make traditional holidays become less common. Although this is true, spending too much time working actually plays the most significant effect on making traditional holidays get more and more unpopular among young generations. For instance, lots of people cannot comeback their hometown for not having finished their work in traditional holidays. Specifically, when a person cannot comeback home because of work, her family member will surely feel sad and not mind about preparation for this traditional holiday. In short, spending too much time working is really a significant reason why traditional holidays are getting more and more unpopular among young generations.
Evidently, in spite of virtual roles, traditional holidays are becoming less and less common among young generations for technological development and spending too much time working.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to respect'?
Suggestion: to respect
... much time to interact on the internet, too respect the relationship on it and. Formerly, y...
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Line 2, column 555, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...ill feel this holiday is really boring. Equally important, young people show great resp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, for instance, in short, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68131868132 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01147525552 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486263736264 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2585632211 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.647058824 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200909825442 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783758946479 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575656488783 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130804630759 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455683240664 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.