“Traditional holidays are getting more and more unpopular among the young generations.”
Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
OR: what extent do you agree/disagree with the statement? Give specific reasons and examples for your argument so that any non-experts in the matter can understand that.
People in different corners of the world have their traditional holidays based on their own official religion and local culture. Along with the development of the society, traditional holidays might be more and more unpopular to some young people. In my opinion, inspite of the neglectfulness of some people, traditional holidays is an unreplacable element for most people for preserving the national culture, and better life satisfactions.
Firstly, during traditional holidays, many young people concerns about preserving national culture. Some people says that along with the development of the society, the disappearance of traditional holidays is unavoidable. In my opinion, it is undeniable that many traditional customs disappeared for the development of the society. However, personally, traditional holidays will never disappear. Obviously, traditional holidays play an important role in the countries' development, it cannot disappear. For example, many countries celebrate Lunar New Year, it is based on the fact that their ancestors used to use the Lunar Calendar in farming, because the Moon affects the tide. In fact, Japan's decision to have an industrial economy is one of many reason that Japan decided to replace the Lunar New Year by the Solar New Year, preserving most related traditional customs. In both example, it is obvious that traditional holidays cannot disappear, although it can be celebrate on other days or it can be changed due to the development of the society. In short, young generations will never neglect traditional holidays for preserving the national culture.
Not only for preserving national culture, young generations will never neglect traditional holidays for their own life satisfaction. Traditonal holidays is a time, usually once a year, for everyone to rest from work, school, etc; no one can be not excited about it. It is showed by the development of many statistics. For example, statistics show that purchasing power always has an considerable increment as the traditional holidays approaching. Not only by statistics, everyone can feel themselves how the traditional holidays affect their life. It is undeniable that during these days, the traffic flow in many streets increases by many times. Or it can be showed by how traditional holidays change people's emotion. During these days, people tend to be more and more cheerful. It is undeniable that traditional holidays help people rest from daily life, it cannot be disappear for better life satisfaction.
Because of their differences in ideology, and communal customs, although traditional holidays might be more and more unpopular to young generations, for preserving national culture and better life satisfaction, traditional holidays will never be neglect by young generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... holidays play an important role in the countries development, it cannot disappear. For e...
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Line 3, column 746, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...to have an industrial economy is one of many reason that Japan decided to replace the Lunar...
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Line 3, column 1053, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... due to the development of the society. In short, young generations will never neg...
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Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s show that purchasing power always has an considerable increment as the tradition...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, in fact, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2370.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56338028169 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07876714205 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415492957746 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 754.2 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.762125531 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.727272727 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161028860145 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638144731984 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526308961206 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137171176305 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358506987292 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.