“Traditional holidays are getting more and more unpopular among the young generations.”
Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
OR: what extent do you agree/disagree with the statement? Give specific reasons and examples for your argument so that any non-experts in the matter can understand that.
Countries in different corners of the world vary from each other in term of their own politics, culture and society. Nowadays, traditional holidays – one of the most significant cultural activities are said to become practically unwelcome among young generation. Personally, traditional holidays are step-by-step having a little mental value in youths’ life for people are having many interesting activities around year, too much work to do and many technologies to connect to people.
First of all, people nowadays enjoy entertainment anytime around year so annual events isn’t the one and only time to relax. As mentioned earlier, refreshment that people can have only in traditional holidays is now appeared in daily meal of very family. Specifically, in Vietnam, contemporary children can consume boiled chicken or Chung cake when they want so they don’t interested in waiting for Tet holiday. In addition, religious places such as temple, pagoda or church that were only opened in important events now welcome both natives and tourists around year. Particularly, Big Church is opening not only for foreigners to visit but also for non-Christian people to study about Christ. In a nutshell, the development of entertainment has helped people relax anytime but it decreases the feeling of traditional holidays.
Secondly, global economics have been becoming difficult so modern people try to work as much as possible to make profit for individual and society. On the other hand, some different arguments lay emphasis on the conceptual value that is more important than money. Obviously, spiritual life itself also has proved to considerably contribute to the development of each person. However, it is the tangibles that play the most significant role in ensuring person’s life. For example, business opportunities become more and more precious so people have to catch decisively. Especially, many Vietnamese companies have reduced days of traditional holidays in order to integrate into global economics. Also, people that work in services industry look classical events as great opportunities to improve individual profit. In short, the busier people are the simpler celebrating traditional holiday is.
In conclusion, one of the happiest cultural activities in the past - traditional holidays is turning into unpopular because of daily interesting activities, busier work and connecting technologies development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
... activities, busier work and connecting technologies development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63858695652 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0885844892 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584239130435 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6685703888 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.277777778 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145496711054 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457102000226 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342862503829 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865705267538 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238691734724 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.