It is right that pop singers are paid more than nurses. How far do you agree or disagree with the above statement? Use specific details and reasons to explain why this statement is needed.
People vary from each other in terms of their own offcial religion, local culture and personal career. In someone’opinion, pop singers are paid more than nurse that is right. Personally, I agree strongly with this statement that is more suitable for enjoying music being primary, one singer can satisfied many audiences, singer influences more in the community.
Firstly, medicine belongs physically, conversely music appropriates mentally, when living standard is advenced, interesting of music is increased and enjoying music is primary demand. Indeed, music helps people are satisfied that is primary key to reduce stress for working. For example, after a working day at company, we are exhausted completely and stressful, we deal with this problem by listening and enjoying a favorite song. Obviously, music can also make people have creative ideas. For instance, designers and painter often use music whole working to can create new ideas for their own task. In society with popularization of music, people will improve ability about arts. For this reason, young people have interesting about art and music who will have more opportunities to join musical communities and clubs. In conclusion, music that is performed by singers is not only for the present but also for the future.
Secondly, Singer have more influences in community, thus we can create changes in society and improving it. Specially, Singer can create the trend in young generation. For example, performances of singer raise funds for charity, this action is model that is enjoyed by young people and encourage they make charitable activities in community. Indeed, influence of singer is interested in the public, so their behaviour can be followed by many people. For example, if your favorite singer has ethical behaviours that can be a good model for others. Music can change thinking way of people about a problem in the world. For this reason, singer creates significant effects for people, especially with who enjoy and interest in music that inspire greatly for them. In short, singers influence significantly to the community than nurses, thus their salary is higher than nurses that is easy to understand.
Because of their differences in ideology, communal custom and practices, as well as individual achivement, thanks to different opinions about the salary of pop singers and nurses, many are preferable for the statement that pop singers are paid more than nurse because musically primary demand, signer influences more in the community and the ability of one signer can serve many audiences as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31386861314 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79562996701 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503649635036 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5206694674 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.55 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165066760976 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590238411909 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672161891098 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140775704681 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732851637196 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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