It is undeniable that there are so many people, who really need to help from other individuals. But, we do not have enough time to stand behind needy people thanks to our hectic schedules, and these days everyone wants to earn chunks of money for leading healthy as well as wealthy life style. Thus, I, somewhat, agree with this statements and I will discuss my view points in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, I believe that there are too many agruments but first and foremost is that nowadays, everyone wants to fullfil their all basic needs and comforts because of modern era. Therefore, they do not have time to help other people and they spend more time on their jobs and other sectors instead of this. Secondly, people become selfish. Because every person wants to give all comforts and better education facilty to their kids. They do not feel other people' pain.
On other hand, discrimination will be removed. If rich people give some money to poor kids in order to that they also able to acheive education and full fil their dreams
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...hand, discrimination will be removed. If rich people give some money to poor kids...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73224043716 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26791098316 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1605022133 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169246171994 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590692081946 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487351025614 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108733898328 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814455948369 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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