We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages.
In today's modern world, the advancements in technology provided us with many benefits. The greatest invention of man so far is internet. It is difficult to imagine our lives without internet. Though, it brings in many benefits there are few drawbacks like security which cannot be ignored.
To begin with, almost all the people of today's generation use internet for various purposes. One of the primary use of internet is for communication. Firstly, internet helps in connecting people from all over the world and makes communication easier. To illustrate, in the past people used pigeons or letters for communicating. By this approach message used to reach the recipient within few days, months or sometimes never. But, with the advent of internet all these problems caused by traditional message passing systems were diminished by transferring the information within seconds. Secondly, internet provides a platform for gaining knowledge. It provides access to all kinds of information which can be used by people to enhance their skills. For example, if students miss a class or if they need more detailed information about a particular topic they can simply learn from internet. Finally, internet is important source of entertainment. Various sites like YouTube, hot-star, amazon prime video are accessible to all the people allowing them to watch movies and helping them to kill the boredom.
However, there are few disadvantages of using internet that should not be ignored. The major drawback is information leak. There is a high chance of hackers stealing sensitive content like bank and other personal details. Moreover, fraudulent activities are increasing at an alarming rate these days. Large number of people use internet in their day-to-day life and it is often difficult to track and control these activities.
To sum up, I believe that the advantages of using internet like knowledge gaining and global communication outweigh the disadvantages. Government must impose strict punishments to those people who make use of internet for illegal activities. Not only the government but it is every individual's responsibility to make sure that sensitive content is not leaked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to imagine our lives without internet. Though, it brings in many benefits there are f...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...nt within few days, months or sometimes never. But, with the advent of internet all t...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...Not only the government but it is every individuals responsibility to make sure that sensit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40233236152 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95898690983 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583090379009 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2883376207 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5652173913 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9130434783 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188247156561 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538476621663 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368389122355 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114607129788 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413620467061 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.