As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
With developing industry age, every firm executive busy in making money. Social responsibilities in businesses is essential organ and almost every globalize company contribute for that. But, in 21st century question often arises that should every organization must account money for environment and developing for a country or they should consider profitness in business. Here, this essay would discuss both aspects of this topic and I represent my perception about this controversial topic. In addition, I firmly believe that every company must recruit special department in order to make the better world and its called corporate social responsibility department.
There are many manifold points for shore up my point of view. First and foremost, if organization put their money in society then its consequence are benefits for company itself, owing to people know about that company and they may be purchased things from that firm. Also, businesses will be grown rapidly and become prominent. To exemplify, let consider the example of Microsoft, this software company created own organization for social responsibility and they raise the fund for society. Due to that today, everyone knows that Microsoft is techie giant in computer industry. Moving further, today the government supports many developing companies; those contribute towards the social responsibilities and provide the extra money for hiring staff and make the company more stable.
Furthermore, today every consumer consider the company for product, company use the money for social purposes. Hence, they are happy to buy such things because they know small amount of money they would pay for environment and making auspicious world. For example, ITC organization they contract with many house hold industry like Colgate and Dove; as a result these company become eminent in India and most people buy product from this firm.
To conclude, making money is a first priority for every business. so, work for financial requirement is not an exception. But, any company already become stable and earn more profit then they must pay up for social responsibilities for environment, vanished poorness in country and many other significant social factors. Finally, I strongly believe that any successful organization often contribute their role in society, whether it's behind the picture or apparantly.
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...eady become stable and earn more profit then they must pay up for social responsibil...
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...r its behind the picture or apparantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51923076923 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84147622535 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3512990574 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.611111111 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121957767028 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520550225197 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485102344466 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879509602499 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204365441876 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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