Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case?
What is the most important to thing in succeed in life?
The time is essential for everyone life. The education time span is an important organ of human life, where human begin to understand the real world. In the contemporary world, there are several cases of students and the cases are interesting because they achieve their goal and become successful, however those are not good in alma-mater education. This essay would discuss the pivotal points of the life-changing moments and discuss which are the significant factors they perform a significant role in student life and they reached up to their goals.
First and Foremost, nowadays education becomes the one type of status, where parents show their child result and feel proud. In addition, the education system is became deteriorated, in other words, it becomes more static. Schools often judge the child by his result, not his practical skills. These skills are essential and due to that many people landed on their goal position. Also, Higher-education like universities performs major concern for individuals. Where most students are flourished and they followed their goal because they are able to understand how education is important.
Moving further, pragmatic ability and hobby the factors that change the lives of people. If a person has greate dynamic skills then he sure ended up to reach their dream position regardless of their formal and higher education. For instance, CEO of Alibaba Jackma failed many times in his career but at last, he reached the top of the mountain. Another factor is a hobby, Hobby has an ability that lifted up to the people on their desired position. If individuals have a good hobby and they follow it then they sure will become successful.
To conclude, formal teaching is not the only factor for judging the life of people. After education, if people believe in self-esteem then they sure become successful. I reaffirm that the self-confidence, practical skills, and hobby have great power, Hence using that anyone achieve their dreams.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...d. In addition, the education system is became deteriorated, in other words, it become...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, for instance, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18322981366 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68544486729 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555900621118 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8489818945 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7222222222 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122141770425 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389783308613 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360515877928 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075456716798 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453381850173 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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