Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case?
What is the most important to thing in succeed in life?
The time is the essential for everyone life. The education time span is important organ of the human life, where human begin to understand the real world. In contemporary world there are several cases of students and the cases are intresting because they achieive their goal and become sucessful, however those are not good in alma-mater education. This essay would discuss the pivotal points of the life changing moments and discuss which are the significant factors they perform the significant role in student life and they reached up to their goals.
First and Foremost, nowadays education is become the one type of status, where parents shows their child result and feel proud. In addition, education system is became deteriorated, in other words it is become more static. Schools often judge the child by his result, not his practical skills. This skills are essential and due to that many people landed on their goal position. Also, Higher-education like universities perform major concern for individuals. Where most students are flourished and they followed their goal because of they are able to understand how education is important.
Moving further, pragmatic ability and hobby the factors that changes the life of people. If person has greate dynamic skills then he sure ended up to reach their dream position regardless of their foraml and higher education. For instance CEO of Alibaba Jackma failed many times in his career but at last he reached top of the mountain. Another factor is hobby, Hobby has a ability that lifted up to the people on their desire position. If individuals have good hobby and they follow to it then they sure will became the successful.
To conclude, formal teaching is not only factor for judging the life of people. After education if people believe in self esteem then they sure become the successful. I reaffirm that the self confidence, practical skills and hobby have a great power, Hence using that anyone achieive their dreams.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...proud. In addition, education system is became deteriorated, in other words it is beco...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...y his result, not his practical skills. This skills are essential and due to that ma...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...flourished and they followed their goal because of they are able to understand how education is...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ain. Another factor is hobby, Hobby has a ability that lifted up to the people on...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...d they follow to it then they sure will became the successful. To conclude, formal ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sing that anyone achieive their dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, for instance, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10736196319 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54040516432 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2128175694 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132931181382 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436412379525 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361190541835 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082873856167 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044796966531 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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