Some people think that people should choose their job based on income
in order to provide security for their family.
Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job?
What other factors should be considered?
With price rises in 21st century, people consider salary as the backbone of life. Today in industry world question related to job often arises and most people confused about what would be benefited either job satisfaction or wage with several zeros. In contemporary life without money, it wouldn't be possible luxurious life; but we can not ignore the second aspect of happiness in human life. Here, this essay will be discussed all points considering the job aspects like significance of abundant salary or a great smile of family members. Also, I would represent my perception about this controversial topic. I firmly believe that today in competition world good salary is required but without joy in the life salary would become insignificant.
There are many manifolds points for shore up the first view that salary is an inevitable organ in human life. First and foremost, today without money hard to survive; also, everything that required for living has a great cost of money. For example, without food, shelter, and clothes life isn't possible mean nearly as impossible to live in this monstrous word, where there is no kindness of destitute people. In addition, today people judge each other by their salary and property so, salary is a one type of status in modern world. Moreover, without money desires of the family-member not satisfy and family lives under the burden of the money. Therefore, today without more money good education, buying household things, and great medical services aren't possible.
Another side of the coin is the happiness of the person, joyfulness in life is indispensable. People do hard work for enjoying life by earning money. But, if they do not enjoy doing such type of work then result is unsatisfactory in the work and performance of the person would be decreased. Let consider another scenario where particular person earn good salary but he is failing in provide the time with family, owing to more work in the office. Due to a consequence of its bond between the family members become less intended to each other and happiness in the family would be vanished. Hence, satisfactory and joyousness has a major concern during work at job.
To conclude, every coin has two sides. Here we emphasize on great wages but, satisfaction is ineluctable. Without happiness of family, salary is worthless. So, I strongly believe that we must consider the satisfaction and out family sphere while choosing the job. Salary slip with enormous amount become just paper of several numbers. These numbers are not able to provide love and not capable to build to strong bonds. Therefore, we first consider a great smile of our family members during selection of the job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2255.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 448.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03348214286 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63093712541 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.9 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2718446015 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.92 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168736786244 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471540588311 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416153402611 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102886419563 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00999241303488 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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