Any country depends on the people.Welfare of people in any country is a pivotal role in country economy. However, We can not conclude that greatness of any country based on it is people welfare. Because any developed country based on its scientist, artist and its government also.
Particular country was developed when ruler of that country makes some system on country, and system's rule follows by country people and government officer. For example recently in India government banned some currency notes that effect on black money and consequently black money reduces and corruption is decreases. So, government has a own role for make a country great.
Here also state that country does not become great based on scientist and artist of that country. However its not true at all. Today, all peoples knows APJ Abdulkalam, he is from India.he had worked for Indian space research organization, today all people around the world appreciate his work and Abdulkalam famouses the name of his country. So,here we can conclude that scientist and artist has a great part of any country. Another good example is Charlie Chaplin. Charlie is famous in the world for great entertainer. And all people in the recalled him by his name followed by its country name.
However we know that coin has a two side, so one side is greatness of any country based on all people include scientist, artist and government of that country. Another side is general people, welfare of general people has a important role in country. For example general people lives in country without any problem like poverty, in other words poverty is very low in particular country that is effect GDP on his country and GDP is increase. GDP is good factor to measure the country greatness.If most people in any country are employed and they are able to manage his welfare that huge effect on country economy and make a country great.
So, finally Particular country greatness based on all types of people, because general people help to increase the country economy. Scientist and Artist are famous for his own ability but always any famous people named are talked with his country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Any country depends on the people.Welfare of people in any country is a pivotal r...
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...ts scientist, artist and its government also. Particular country was developed wh...
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...uption is decreases. So, government has a own role for make a country great. H...
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...factor to measure the country greatness.If most people in any country are employed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, so, for example, in particular, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98333333333 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52028192622 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438888888889 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0147630095 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4210526316 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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