Many people think that international travel will decrease in future. Do you think it is a positive development? Give examples from your experience.
With advancement in technology and daily hectic schedule of people, a debate has developed wheather world-wide tour and journy would be decreased in future so,it will be better for human beign or on another side it would be negative effect because of plethora of problems arises. Here, I firmly believe that it will become the positive development and I will give the some examples in order to prove this point of view.
There are manifolds points for shore up my opinion. First and foremost, today use of internet reaches at pinnacle point. We can easily get information on the google also, people have no time for spare holidays. Hence, we can say that in future might be international travel would be diminished. Besides this, technology has been increasing constantly since last decade, in travelling sector flourished with visual and augmented reality gadgets where we people enjoy international places with same environment and visual effects hence, technology greater dominating on travelling sector. Although this gadgets quite expensive, with help of AI in future this project will become successful and cheaper. Thus, on the heels of these advance technology we can strongly say that it would be positive development in terms of economic.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, today people have stringent schedule and many family likes to enjoy vacation at home. so, here the psychology of the people also responsible for degrading international travelling. Since, many families postpone the plan of long distance tour, owing to prices of tickets have been increasing continuously. In addition, as per current trend people more like to explore domestic places and it would be cheap also unlike word-wide tour.
To conclude, international travel will decreases lead to the negative development is not exception, many countries totally dependent on tourism and travelling industry. By virtue of this it would be bad situation on hosting country. But undeniably we can say that in future international travel will falling down then it could be benefit for future generation of humans because of they save abundant money, they easily talked to each other with advance technology and they spare more time with their families rather than in travelling.
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flaws:
you still have grammatical issues, like:
international travel will decreases lead to the negative development is not exception, many countries totally dependent on tourism and travelling industry.
should be:
international travel which will decrease and lead to the negative development is not exceptional, because many countries are totally dependent on tourism and travelling industry.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 362 350
No. of Characters: 1862 1500
No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.362 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.144 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.73 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 142 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.133 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.398 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.327 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.521 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.097 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...d journy would be decreased in future so,it will be better for human beign or on an...
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Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ositive development and I will give the some examples in order to prove this point o...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...minating on travelling sector. Although this gadgets quite expensive, with help of A...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ve development in terms of economic. Further emphasizing on my point of view, today ...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...family likes to enjoy vacation at home. so, here the psychology of the people also...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'fall'
Suggestion: fall
...hat in future international travel will falling down then it could be benefit for futur...
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Line 7, column 371, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...benefit for future generation of humans because of they save abundant money, they easily talked...
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Line 7, column 537, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir families rather than in travelling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, then, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29362880886 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7802997191 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576177285319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1543944702 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4375 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175142607455 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614449207912 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627634677021 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115375565726 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02627874207 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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