Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It has been debatable issue whether youth must set long term goal in order to become success in life or individual should consider short-term goal for getting immediate fame and recognition. However, immediate benefite provide great deal of motivation, I believe that everyone should consider long-term consequences of the contemporary action for make the future auspicious. Here, I would represent my point of view with example of science and sports sphere that stimulates individuals towards long term benefits rather than immediate felicity.
First and foremost, at young age everyone has a copious amount of energy. Hence, it is not a challenging to become successful at early age. But, long-term triumph require great deal of work and it is worthful for individual life. Likewise, Sachin Tendulkar- god of cricet, who started his career at age of 16 and he already good at bowling. However, to become the sucess in cricket he started to play with bat. Today, word is witnessed about 100 century: that is done by the Sachin. Same as at early age young people set a ambitious and realistic goal then it provides the way to become successful. Apart from this, short-term goal not ensure the future about our further life. Most people are complacent and they won't try to acheive something new and they live their commanplace life with out any growth. Therefore, long-term success pave the way towards developing.
Secondly, at young age most students has a innovative thoughts. That leads towards new innovation. That's why more students are excited towards research rather than merely course learning. However, course-based program efficient to provide healthy amount of salary, it does not provide a long-term benefits of the scientists. For example, Albert Einstine spent their life for research and experiment. Today, everyone knows about his contribution in science and technology. Nevertheless, he had opportunity to work as a employee in a organization. But, his research excitement, dedication and long-term planning leads towards new relationship between energy and mass of the object.
Admittedly, imminent fame provides motivation to become more meritorious in future. precipitate benefits of the hard-work provide the example of the propitious result. Hence, immediate merits of the short-term goal should not overlooked. Basis on which, plethora of employees work for their task and based on that result they will decide new path for their career or work.
To conclude, both benefits are accounted to become succesful in life. But, in my point of view people should consider long-term path and they devide their work sub-work in short-term goal. Hence, step by step acheiving short-term goal individual reach their final destination.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becoming'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: becoming
... energy. Hence, it is not a challenging to become successful at early age. But, long-term...
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...bat. Today, word is witnessed about 100 century: that is done by the Sachin. Same as at...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... Same as at early age young people set a ambitious and realistic goal then it pr...
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Line 5, column 786, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...ew and they live their commanplace life with out any growth. Therefore, long-term succes...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...econdly, at young age most students has a innovative thoughts. That leads towards...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thought'?
Suggestion: thought
...oung age most students has a innovative thoughts. That leads towards new innovation. Tha...
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...innovative thoughts. That leads towards new innovation. Thats why more students are excited to...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...hts. That leads towards new innovation. Thats why more students are excited towards r...
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Line 9, column 298, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...salary, it does not provide a long-term benefits of the scientists. For example, Albert ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rtheless, he had opportunity to work as a employee in a organization. But, his re...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ad opportunity to work as a employee in a organization. But, his research excitem...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...s motivation to become more meritorious in future. precipitate benefits of the hard-work ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Precipitate
...n to become more meritorious in future. precipitate benefits of the hard-work provide the e...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'overlook'
Suggestion: overlook
...erits of the short-term goal should not overlooked. Basis on which, plethora of employees ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39722863741 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83024061439 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519630484988 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3018855773 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4642857143 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4642857143 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196342281719 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508178668586 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482181982772 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120920956572 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487371991472 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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