As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that not only do corporations make money but they also need to have public responsibilities. In my opinion, besides generating profit, I strongly believe that conducting businesses in a socially responsible manner is one of the top priorities for each firm.
On the one hand, generally, while making money, the companies also benefit society in many ways. The more profit the businesses earn, the more taxes they have to pay. Governments can use those taxes to spend on healthcare, education, and entertainment. Therefore, life equality can be improved. In addition, companies that make efforts to maximize their profit can expand, and as a result, they will provide citizens with more jobs, which reduces the unemployment rate. For example, businesses can use their capital to expand their production and create new job opportunities within the community.
On the other hand, there are many reasons why companies should agree to have social obligations. One reason is that their operations have a profound influence on the environment. The emissions from factories lead to environmental pollution such as the greenhouse effect, global warming, and ozone depletion, which affect badly residential areas. Therefore, firms have to be responsible for their actions contaminating the environment by using new technologies to recycle wastes instead of disposing of them right away. Another reason is that companies earn a lot of money, so they should put money back into the community through charity to help people in need. They can also do some philanthropic actions such as providing scholarships and giving donations. Vinamilk Company, for example, contributed to the improved nutritional status of children in special circumstances by giving them more than 100 free bottles of fresh milk.
In conclusion, although I agree that generating profit is the fundamental principle of business, I would believe that companies should also have consideration for social responsibilities
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onsideration for social responsibilities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47727272727 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13146447241 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6895564609 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262292054362 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834286429883 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759348470824 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187126068395 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636733762786 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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