as well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree
Over the past few years, the issue of responsibilities of society in businesses has become highly controversial. Some people point out that businesses should only focus on making a profit, while others believe that businesses should do more for society than simply making money. I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my strong opinion.
Generally speaking, there are two reasons why people believe that businesses should contribute to society. such as charity, volunteer and support. the main reason why people in favor of this idea is because businesses should have a wider role to play in society. This is because eventually businesses and society are an interactive system. Secondly, businesses should also spend some their profits on charity programs. If companies help to improve the communities around them, they will grow reputation and image of the companies.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case for idea that businesses must focus on their profit. Firstly, companies are made from a lot of people. Therefore, if they would like to keep the management, they would focus on generation of economy. A further point is that businesses are likely to pursue only their benefit. Therefore, in modern society, they overlook social contribution. As a result, this phenomenon has arisen in low development.
In conclusion, this is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. Despite arguments to contrary, I feel that businesses have to support our society. If they would help, society is able to better more than the present.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24206349206 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81553421755 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7017980252 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.3888888889 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170565641703 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465541531362 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526396860686 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100586683403 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390602621193 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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