When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that what is the most important when choosing a job. Most people base on the amount of money to decide on a career. Personally, I disagree that the salary is the key to decide, because other factors are equally important.
First of all, it depends on hobbies and abilities so they can choose a job which are suitable with them. A job relates to private hobbies, which makes people become more enthusiastic. They ready to work in a long time and try my best to complete their work well. Thus they feel more confident and are proud of themselves. If a job are appropriate with their ability, they can work better than other people so they reach professional achievements. They are praised by managers and colleagues and this means they have motivation to work. They will continue to try until they succeed.
Nevertheless, salary can help people pay for food, clothing, accommodation, education,…but it cannot bring satisfaction for them. Under pressure of working, they will feel discouraged. If it continues to occur in a long time, they will blame themselves and become angry with everything. They only want to complete work without mistakes. They cannot progress and success will never come to them.
In conclusion, I believe that other factors are more important than salary. It help us feel satisfied and happier in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97807017544 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78772150641 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574561403509 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9166884552 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.7647058824 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4117647059 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119967645651 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465158018317 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913308307269 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100905156305 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118579596632 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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