When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that people should choose jobs based on how much they can be paid. income is one of the factors to be considered, I do not think that it is the most considerable.
Firstly, I think people should do what they really want. they are going to spend the rest of their lives working so it is better to pick what makes them happy. For example, if you do not like life sciences, there is no way that you are able to become a doctor. Even though health care bring a high salary, you will never be satisfied with your choice. Maybe you can change your jobs if you want, you have wasted your life for all these years. picking a jobs based more on what you desire to do.
Secondly, people can think about their best skills as part of this consideration. For example, if mathematics are best fit to you, then choose something related to it. Thus, you will work with all your efficiency and easily get a higher level in your jobs, which means your income is going to rise up to what you expect to have. this can make you more willing to work everyday than your income.
In conclusion, a lot of factors can be put in consideration of future careers than just only salary. it would be better if you do what you want then how much you earn.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Income
...obs based on how much they can be paid. income is one of the factors to be considered,...
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Suggestion: They
...people should do what they really want. they are going to spend the rest of their li...
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Suggestion: Picking
...e wasted your life for all these years. picking a jobs based more on what you desire to...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a job' or simply 'jobs'?
Suggestion: a job; jobs
... your life for all these years. picking a jobs based more on what you desire to do. ...
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Suggestion: This
... to rise up to what you expect to have. this can make you more willing to work every...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... this can make you more willing to work everyday than your income. In conclusion,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ling to work everyday than your income. In conclusion, a lot of factors can be p...
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Suggestion: It
...f future careers than just only salary. it would be better if you do what you want...
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Suggestion:
...o what you want then how much you earn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32911392405 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20090633082 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561181434599 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6777518248 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2857142857 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21588886019 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856793329494 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579149531037 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138860043986 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028564132519 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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