When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When it comes to planning a new town, people may argue that building public parks with sports equipments is more crucial than shopping malls. In my opinion, I can partly concur with this statement as considering entertaining places attributable to many factors including the difference in average age and income as well as the main purpose of the given region.
Firstly, the construction of public places should be thoroughly discussed to meet the needs of their citizens. It is prevalent that people at different ages and class have the tendency to seek for distinct entertainment valuation. For instance, while elder people usually favor peaceful and quiet places for relaxation such as playing chess with their friends or having a cup of tea, adolescents prefer going to malls to look for sense of freedom as a result of getting away from homes which are assumed to be bored and confined. In this case, public parks are definitely wiser choices for the former one and malls are better options for the latter. furthermore, Binh Duong province where 80% of the population is working-class whose mean income is lower than the price of a shirt in a shopping center. Thus, taking their kids to go picnic with handmade food in parks is the optimum choice.
Secondly, it is necessary to utilize conventional resources to enrich the economy of the area and local citizens. Tourist attraction factors will need to be taken into consideration if the main income of the given place comes from tourism industry. In this way, appropriate malls should be constructed to provide leisure activities to the area instead of traditional parks. Doing this will help to boost the expenditure of visitors in many ways. For example, Seoul, capital of Korean has become extremely nourish due to countless shopping centers which created a hundred of job opportunities along with enormous profit under the form of taxes from each sold products.
In conclusion, we can only determine exactly what should be built in a new town when all factor are counted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'discussed meeting'.
Suggestion: discussed meeting
...n of public places should be thoroughly discussed to meet the needs of their citizens. It is prev...
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Line 5, column 651, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...alls are better options for the latter. furthermore, Binh Duong province where 80% of the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04719764012 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71395728967 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619469026549 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1215023559 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7857142857 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20644610994 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660810551878 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714148720115 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121285275284 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508765600944 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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