While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is a common belief that global warming has serious repercussions for our environment, whereas some people think tree clearance has more influence on our global. I would argue that both are important issues caused severely various effects that must be immediately tackled.
On the one hand, it is believed that global warming causes the most urgent issues we face today. First and foremost, the temperature is rising more and more, by which I mean there are more hot days, on average, the hot days are hotter and fewer cold days. As a result, it is negatively affecting the habitat of people and wildlife. For example, some researchers show that as temperatures change, ice is melting worldwide and this causes polar bears to soon starve due to walking or swimming long distances to get to the remaining ice and wait for their food such as seals. Furthermore, precipitation has increased across the world as well due to climate change caused floods in some areas, while some regions are experiencing severe drought with no rain.
On the other hand, it is said that the loss of trees and other vegetation has a more host of problems. The first reason is species that are unable to find and adapt to new living environments will gradually be starved to death. As a result, they could teeter on the verge of extinction in the near future. Additionally, the cutting down of forests makes people’s habitation increasingly vulnerable. For example, when it is raining heavily, flooding and soil erosion are likely to occur because there are not any trees to absorb and hold it, so it is extremely dangerous for people living near the deforested hills and mountains.
In conclusion, it is clear that both issues are the source of the disastrous consequences. Hence, we should take action instantly to address deforestation and global warming at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, whereas, while, for example, i mean, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94585987261 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73100824249 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3417439838 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.928571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247584958803 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724605129177 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600968972526 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144002287897 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451167098651 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.