The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.
The world of employment is remaining unstable and need a very high work performance. So having the same work or the same work conditions is no longer suitable. There are several factors as well as solution for employers in general to make some preparations.
This can be attributed to two mainly reasons. Initially, customer’s demand is rising and very complicated, as they require top-notch and high-quality products. Enterprises must pursue the innovations and enhance productivity and effectiveness. Their recruitment is challenging to pass, since they have to choose the best employee with employable skills, who is solution-driven and self-sufficient. Secondly, the market is competitive, so enterprises have to adapt to new trends and constantly improve productivity. Employees need to equip themselves with expertise and delicate to the companies.
In order to adapt to the world of work which is shifting at a very fast pace, those who have just graduated, should be well-prepared before entering the workforce. As a student in university, they can get used to the working environment from internship, so there is no confusion when they enter the competitive job market. In addition, employees should be self-motivated; so that they can cultivate their knowledge and achieve the best work performance. Their eagerness forces them to improve themselves. This might be the most common way to satisfy not only the companies but also the customers. motivation is a strong force to boost the employee's abilities.
To summarize, the enterprises require the best employment due to the innovations and competitions. therefore, employees need some preparations for a solid future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Motivation
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52307692308 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40404388822 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6477382968 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4705882353 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259376347569 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758245297157 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104432765084 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168776209248 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121734385524 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.14 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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